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|Sticky: [WRITING TASK 1] The average on cell phone, national fixed line amd international fixed line service
4 - @Hannah Robjn Thanks for your feedback. Maybe i typed too fast so i made a lot unexpected mistakes. I...
Writing Feedbackelliemiller - Oct 13, 2020 / elliemiller - Oct 14, 2020
|IELTS WRITING TASK 1: The table below shows the number of vehicles registered in Australia in 2010
2 - The presentation shows percentage of change, not percentage of growth. Your reference is incorrect. It should have been restated...
Writing Feedbackkarlanguyen - 12 hrs ago / Holt - 11 hrs ago
|IELTS Writing task 2- The use of social media is replacing face-to-face interaction
Writing FeedbackMJaylee - 1 day ago / MJaylee - 16 hrs ago
|IELTS Task 2: Will Computer Replace Teachers? I don't think so - they do not have emotions
5 - going to show why I think you should use more complex sentences. For example, "..., no matter how...
Writing FeedbackTofy - Feb 23, 2021 / plamEK16cqt - 20 hrs ago
|IELTS TASK 1 The line graph illustrates how much waste produced by three companies from 2000 to 2015
Writing FeedbackTrang0502 - Feb 23, 2021 / plamEK16cqt - 20 hrs ago
|Maths and business success - IELTS Writing Task 2 Opinion Essay
2 - There is a missing sentence in your thesis statement in the first paragraph. You forgot to indicate the measured...
Writing Feedbackphatblack - 1 day ago / Holt - 22 hrs ago
|The high salary should be more concerned than the degree of satisfaction in job. What's your opinion
2 - When you partially advocate for the given statement, you are writing an extent essay. You are not writing an...
Writing Feedbackieltsstudent1711 - 1 day ago / Holt - 22 hrs ago
|Writing task 1 table with a trend - visitor statistics in Australia
2 - All of your paragraphs should have a minimum of 3 sentences. This includes the summary overview. The lack of...
Writing Feedbackdinhminhhai - 1 day ago / Holt - 22 hrs ago
|[IELTS WRITING TASK 2] Free education irrespective of personal wealth
2 - This is not an extent essay. Therefore, your discussion approach, which is, "to an extent' response is incorrect. There...
Writing Feedbacklingling40hrs - 1 day ago / Holt - 23 hrs ago
|Children must be a good members of society. What the parents and school can teach it?
2 - This is actually an IELTS Task 2 practice prompt. Were you writing in preparation for that test? Or is...
Writing FeedbackIndriani - 1 day ago / Holt - 23 hrs ago
|IELTS"Everyone should become vegetarian because they do not need to eat meat to have a healthy diet"
Writing FeedbackDinhHuong - Feb 19, 2021 / vannn - 1 day ago
|Essay about banning mobile phone during schoolday
3 - @hglingg I think that you should not use word 'whatever' because it is informal. Also, you can write off...
Writing Feedbackhglingg - Feb 21, 2021 / vannn - 1 day ago
|The graph below shows changes in young adult unemployment rates in England between 1993 and 2012.
Writing Feedbacknguyenanhduc1998 - 2 days ago / nguyenanhduc1998 - 1 day ago
|Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more popular
3 - @Holt thank you very much for your detailed and comprehensive feedback! You showed a really interesting point of view,...
Writing FeedbackGia_geeya - 2 days ago / Gia_geeya - 1 day ago
|"Teenage Driving Statistics" - Driving Licenses for People Under Eighteen Years Old
Writing Feedbackbader215 - 2 days ago / Holt - 1 day ago
|IELTS TASK 2: Investing in science education
Writing Feedbackthienthieny13 - Feb 23, 2021 / thienthieny13 - 2 days ago
|IELTS TASK 2: Traveling to work is a negative or positive development. Discuss both views.
Writing Feedbackchicky1608 - Feb 23, 2021 / Holt - 2 days ago
|Two given maps demonstrate the road network around a City Hospital in 2007 and in 2010
NEW - Cambridge IELTS 13 Test 1 Writing Task 1 - road network Two given maps demonstrate the road network...
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|Help for Correction my essay . Academic essay _ IELTS Academic Task 2 on a consumer society
2 - Good restatement with the slight problem of you still using the phrase "which possessing" in the presentation. The best...
Writing FeedbackMakferayd - Feb 23, 2021 / Holt - Feb 23, 2021
|The affordable care act and what the solution is
2 - This is a very timely essay. However, it tends to get confusing to read because of the constantly diverting...
Writing Feedbacki90kaee - Feb 23, 2021 / Holt - Feb 23, 2021
|IELTS TASK 2:Discuss pros and cons for the young between gap year and starting university studies.
Writing Feedbackcath1803 - Feb 22, 2021 / cath1803 - Feb 23, 2021
|IELTS1: The given line graph displays the number of alumni in Canada within fiveteen years 1992-2007
3 - @Holt Hi, thank you for taking your time to evaluate my writing, but I don't fully understand what you...
Writing Feedbackkane1101 - Feb 22, 2021 / kane1101 - Feb 23, 2021
|PRACTICE WRITING D1 - (Paragraph) Volunteer work
2 - In order to properly write the response paragraph, you first have to understand what response method you have to...
Writing Feedbackpeachfully - Feb 22, 2021 / Holt - Feb 23, 2021
|Instead of finding measures to solve climate change problem we should find some ways to live with it
2 - Why do you totally disagree? What are the reasoning topics you will be discussing? Present the outline of topics...
Writing FeedbackNhungmeow246 - Feb 22, 2021 / Holt - Feb 23, 2021
|Oil consumption of four different major consumers - Ielts task 1 - line graph
2 - The task allows only 20 minutes for total writing, that includes editing and proof reading. So the standard writing...
Writing FeedbackHainguyen88 - Feb 21, 2021 / Holt - Feb 22, 2021
|Is it true that the vegetarian diet is more beneficial for health than eating meat?
2 - The subject proposed for this prompt is not being presented in an argumentative form. It is presented as an...
Writing Feedbackella_lyly - Feb 21, 2021 / Holt - Feb 22, 2021
|MULTIPLE ASPECTS OF SPACE EXPLORATION AND THE PREDICTION OF ITS CHANGE IN THE FUTURE
3 - There are some position and spelling mistakes in your essay. Using 'occurred' instead of 'occured'. The 'obviously' stands in...
Writing Feedbackgingin3001 - Feb 21, 2021 / ella_lyly - Feb 21, 2021
|Tell about the most interesting film you have seen recently
2 - The problem is your lack of familiarity with the English language. Specifically, how to write a movie review. You...
Writing FeedbackAlya_TS - Feb 20, 2021 / Holt - Feb 21, 2021
|Cheaper international travel and more countries welcome foreign visitors. Adv outweigh disadv?
Writing Feedbacklan82 - Feb 15, 2021 / lan82 - Feb 20, 2021
|IETLS Writing Task 2 | Effects of negative reporting on individuals and society
3 - I think the explanations and opinions are not enough clearly. And also I think by reporting problems, governments can...
Writing Feedbackejohn - Feb 19, 2021 / hglingg - Feb 20, 2021
|Many claim that the important factor in sport is physical strength; however, the opponents disagree
2 - The essay instructions requires a 4 paragraph comparison discussion with your personal opinion presented. Your approach to the writing...
Writing FeedbackAurora27 - Feb 19, 2021 / Holt - Feb 20, 2021
|Writing 1: The line shows the percentage of tourists to Scotland who visited Edinburgh attractions
2 - You have several spelling errors in the presentation that show a lack of proof reading for this paper. You...
Writing FeedbackVanVan Nguyen - Feb 19, 2021 / Holt - Feb 20, 2021
|In some countries, it is important to have a private house rather than renting one
Writing FeedbackNgocngo - Jan 25, 2021 / Ngocngo - Feb 19, 2021
|Ielts1 - The quantity of pineapple exports in three different countries and the cost of pineapple
2 - Avoid using long sentences in your presentations that require 2 different sets of information. In the first paragraph, you...
Writing Feedbackthang1305 - Feb 18, 2021 / Holt - Feb 19, 2021
|IELTS Writing Task 1: Student enrolment in 1980 and 2000
Writing FeedbackNgocLinhh - Jan 31, 2021 / NgocLinhh - Feb 18, 2021
|Essay about the effect of technology using from home
3 - In the conclusion, the phrase "All in all" is quite informal, so I suggest you use "In conclusion" or...
Writing Feedbackhglingg - Feb 17, 2021 / Pham Bien - Feb 18, 2021
|Students choosing subjects - writing introduction for some essay
2 - One topic per thread There are direct questions being asked in the topic. What is the reason? What...
Writing Feedbackchucnguyenthi - Feb 18, 2021 / Holt - Feb 18, 2021
|IELTS: world pineapple exports and a breakdown of the cost to the consumer of each pineapple in 2019
2 - Incorrect vocabulary was used in the summary overview. The word "Otherwise" cannot be used in this presentation because you...
Writing Feedbackantinhsg - Feb 17, 2021 / Holt - Feb 18, 2021
|The major environmental problem is the loss of specific species of plants and animals
NEW - Some people say that the main environmental problem off our time is the loss of particular species of plants...
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|The foundation for sportsmen's success. PHYSICAL STRENGTH AND MENTAL STRENGTH IN SPORT
Writing FeedbackPham Bien - Feb 16, 2021 / coolbaby - Feb 17, 2021
|IELTS WRITING TASK 2: the science and preparation of food should be taught in school time
4 - @nvsthao Hi! I think your body paragraph 1 is quite undeveloped as paragraph 2. Because it is a discussion...
Writing Feedbacknvsthao - Feb 17, 2021 / ilikesnow - Feb 17, 2021
|IELTS: Do you believe that professional athletes make good role model for young people?
Writing Feedbackpplhvnh1706 - Feb 9, 2021 / boboiboy1a3 - Feb 16, 2021
|The table gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries
Writing Feedbacklehalinh - Feb 1, 2021 / boboiboy1a3 - Feb 16, 2021
|IELTS Writing Task 2 - Family size essay
2 - Unfortunately, scoring is part of our premium services so I cannot score your essay. Any student who scores your...
Writing Feedbackboboiboy1a3 - Feb 15, 2021 / Holt - Feb 16, 2021
|Should sharing knowledge about scientific research, business and the academic world be allowed?
2 - You have turned a 5 paragraph comparison essay into a 4 paragraph personal opinion essay. The format for your...
Writing Feedbackgiangkc1811 - Feb 15, 2021 / Holt - Feb 16, 2021
|IELTS ESSAY TASK 2, it is about how human action can damage the environment.
Writing Feedbackmalugesteira - Feb 12, 2021 / malugesteira - Feb 15, 2021
|[Writing task 1] - Household income and spending on food and clothes in UK
5 - As far as I am concerned , in the last sentence of the 3rd paragraph, "while" is used with","...
Writing Feedbackvungocf1417 - Feb 8, 2021 / lan82 - Feb 15, 2021
|Students Working Part-time - IELTS Writing Task 2
5 - I do recommend you to use transition words (therefore, furthermore, additionally) at the beginning of your paragraphs to be...
Writing FeedbackTpG2006 - Feb 10, 2021 / teddyz - Feb 15, 2021
|Jonas Salk, the Man Who Saved the World with Vaccines
2 - Well, this is an interesting personal influence essay. Unfortunately, without knowing if this is in response to a prompt,...
Writing FeedbackWiseCupcake - Feb 14, 2021 / Holt - Feb 15, 2021
|IELTS task 1, what nursing graduates did in the UK
Writing Feedbacklan82 - Feb 4, 2021 / lan82 - Feb 15, 2021
|IELTS- Task 2: Health benefits in countryside and cities
NEW - Please give me some advice on my writing essay. Thanks a lot! Topic: Many people believe that it...
Writing FeedbackPriscillia - Feb 14, 2021 / — -
|IELTS Writing task - study the science of food - requirement of advice
4 - hi, the format of your essay is wrong as it contains only 4 paragraphs. Your opinion is not strong...
Writing Feedbackcoheny - Feb 10, 2021 / Priscillia - Feb 14, 2021
|IELTS WRITING TASK 2: TOPIC EDUCATION & - TYPE: DISCUSS BOTH THESE VIEWS AND GIVE YOUR OWN OPINION.
4 - @ilikesnow Hi! I think you should paraphrase the question completely instead of paraphrasing only one of the statements. You...
Writing Feedbackilikesnow - Feb 11, 2021 / ranagiani - Feb 13, 2021
|IELTS writing task 2: Each year, a number of languages fade into extinction
4 - @LadyOfClockwork As adding one comment in terms of Holt's comment, I can see there is one possibility to correct....
Writing FeedbackLadyOfClockwork - Feb 8, 2021 / coheny - Feb 13, 2021
|Some believe that computers are the most valuable invention in the late 20th and early 21st century
3 - @Holt I rewrote the essay, is it better? THANK You~ Many people are positive that computers are the...
Writing FeedbackCrazy Snake - Feb 10, 2021 / Crazy Snake - Feb 13, 2021
|ENVIRONMENTAL PROBLEMS - rising sea levels and excessive use of plastic bags
2 - Oops! You did not only use memorized phrases in your presentation, you totally altered the discussion topic as well....
Writing Feedbacksongthaonguyen - Feb 9, 2021 / Holt - Feb 10, 2021
|IELTS writting part 1 bar chart practice: Female Unemployment rate in 4 countries of the UK
3 - @Linhmely Your overview: Overall, it could be clearly seen that there are some negligible differences between the statistics...
Writing FeedbackLinhmely - Feb 7, 2021 / Crazy Snake - Feb 10, 2021
|People's shopping habits depend more on the age group they belong to than any other factors.
4 - @LadyOfClockwork Your ideas are great, but there is a contradiction in the first body paragraph. The first and...
Writing FeedbackLadyOfClockwork - Feb 6, 2021 / Crazy Snake - Feb 10, 2021
|Forms of teaching - school should choose students according to their academic abilities
2 - This is a compare and contrast essay with a personal opinion presentation. You have not followed the required discussion...
Writing Feedbackstormiiii - Feb 9, 2021 / Holt - Feb 10, 2021
|The proportion of people who used the Internet in three countries between 1999 and 2009
3 - i think you should go for this structure with the introduction, the overview and the 2 detailed paragraphs...
Writing Feedbackkhadong - Feb 6, 2021 / Linhmely - Feb 9, 2021
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