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|GKS Scholarship- Statement of purpose (Language Study Plan)
NEW - Hello, I'm planning on applying for the GKS scholarship, and this is my language study plan, where it is...
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|Examples how you will gain from your scholarship. Indonesian policy, collaboration with Australia
2 - The representation of your plans need to subtly include a reference as to how you plan to get around...
ScholarshipUmbu Richy - Mar 9, 2021 / Holt - 12 hrs ago
|How have you implemented a change or reform? Controversial court judgments
2 - Focus on a singular challenge that helped produce reform. Neither of these presentations will actually impress the reviewer because...
ScholarshipUmbu Richy - Mar 9, 2021 / Holt - 12 hrs ago
|Study impact on my career as a Policy Analyst and Planning Expert in government
2 - Remove the first paragraph. You do not need an introductory paragraph when writing character limited responses. The character limit...
ScholarshipUmbu Richy - Mar 9, 2021 / Holt - 12 hrs ago
|The Global UGRAD Program is.... Why would you be a great participant in the Global UGRAD Program?
2 - Your reference to PASTO App is not really along the lines of community leadership. It will not help you...
Scholarshipomarkamal - 1 day ago / Holt - 12 hrs ago
|AAS - Atmospheric Sciences - your proposed course and institution
2 - You have to present a first and second university choice. That is how the reviewer will base your choice...
ScholarshipSilvana - 1 day ago / Holt - 13 hrs ago
|2021 GKS Graduate Personal Statement: International Business Major
NEW - Hello I am applying for 2021 GKS Graduate Scholarship My chosen major is International Business I hope anyone can...
ScholarshipJun0101 - 1 day ago / — -
|GKS-Undergraduate Essay for Food Sciences
NEW - Gks personal statement Hello. This is the draft of my personal statement for an application under the GKS...
Scholarshipgorgonzola - Mar 10, 2021 / — -
|My educational program of enhancing Korean and English language proficiency before coming to Korea
2 - Remove the reference to Hong Sun Soo in the essay. To make this stronger. indicate instead that you are...
Scholarshipboodoo - Mar 9, 2021 / Holt - Mar 10, 2021
|Study plans to improve foreign languages (Korean, English, etc) required for taking a degree course
ScholarshipVanessa Mendez B - Mar 9, 2021 / Holt - Mar 10, 2021
|Digital pandemic - Writing an outstanding Essay for AAS
6 - I didn't see you put the course name and the institution you choose. According to your essay, I also...
ScholarshipLovelyshaa - Feb 20, 2021 / Umbu Richy - Mar 9, 2021
|2022 Australia Awards Scholarship Essay - Applied economics
3 - Too many explanations. Describe your interest and your/community needs first and then support it with your evidence(s) that can...
Scholarshipjivrymuh - Feb 28, 2021 / Umbu Richy - Mar 9, 2021
|Teaching English language (Australia Award Scholarship) Master Degree in TESOL
3 - Too much introduction. I will prefer to answer the question directly first and then list my reason(s) and problem(s)...
ScholarshipTin Maung Oo - Mar 1, 2021 / Umbu Richy - Mar 9, 2021
|Essay AAS for Master of Public Health degree in Australia
3 - Maybe you can answer the question directly first and then explain your reason(s). For example: I am applying...
Scholarshipsucianggraini - Mar 4, 2021 / Umbu Richy - Mar 9, 2021
|Doctoral Degree for AAS 2021
4 - Your example is too general, maybe you can be more specific. For example, provides translation services and/or workshop for...
Scholarshipkartini79 - Mar 6, 2021 / Umbu Richy - Mar 9, 2021
|Learning another way to think about things. Language study plan essay
Scholarshipdorra - Mar 7, 2021 / dorra - Mar 8, 2021
|I am a young leader, who is hunting for knowledge - UGRAD exchange program application
2 - The essay does not respond to the most important requirement of the essay which is a discussion of the...
ScholarshipIslambek - Mar 8, 2021 / Holt - Mar 8, 2021
|COVID-19 x-ray medical images. How did you choose your proposed course and institution?
2 - Kick off the essay with the Indonesia-Australia Cooperation Covid 19 Response plan first. That way you immediately catch the...
Scholarshipoedale - Mar 8, 2021 / Holt - Mar 8, 2021
|Aerospace engineer - concept, theory, or topic you have explored
2 - You failed to respond to the prompt in totality. You need to discuss your intellectual curiosity first, then why...
ScholarshipLavanyaD17 - Mar 7, 2021 / Holt - Mar 8, 2021
|GKS-G Personal Statement - Creative Economy Diplomacy
3 - Oooh, yes I see your point. Thank you very much for your feedback, I will rewrite it again and...
Scholarshipayo_yuk - Mar 6, 2021 / ayo_yuk - Mar 7, 2021
|Learning languages - my study plan. STATEMENT OF PURPOSE FOR KOREAN SCHOLARSHIP
3 - @lynleo Hi, yeah I think the comittee wanted to see how strong-willed we are in applying for the scholarship,...
Scholarshiplynleo - Mar 6, 2021 / karinrizky - Mar 7, 2021
|Confidence and expertise - Why would you be a great participant in the Global UGRAD Program?
2 - The problem with this presentation is still the lack of leadership skills and your direct participation, in a leadership...
Scholarshipi_m - Mar 5, 2021 / Holt - Mar 6, 2021
|Being resilient - Personal Statement GKS-G MBA Aspirant
3 - @Holt Yes, I have consular confirmation of this heritage as well as birth certificates that supports this. Thank you...
ScholarshipAlejandroHz96 - Mar 4, 2021 / AlejandroHz96 - Mar 5, 2021
|AAS - Accountant/Auditor - plans when you finish your studies?[500 characters]
4 - i think you should categorize your plan into shorterm and longterm, better if you add information of your continuation...
ScholarshipRebu - Feb 18, 2021 / sucianggraini - Mar 4, 2021
|Australia Awards Scholarship Essay (Master of Public Policy)
ScholarshipUmbu Richy - Mar 4, 2021 / Umbu Richy - Mar 4, 2021
|Personal statement for Environmental landscape Architecture master programme
2 - The essay is based ont he previous prompt requirements for the GKS-G program. You need to write the essay...
ScholarshipEnergy - Mar 1, 2021 / Holt - Mar 2, 2021
|2021 GKS SCHOLARSHIP - PERSONAL STATEMENT - INTERNATIONAL TRADE
2 - Hi Sharon. Listen, I can really see the sincerity in your application. You are doing your best to prove...
ScholarshipSharonSahian - Feb 28, 2021 / Holt - Feb 28, 2021
|Personal Statement about Public Administration - Graduate program GKS
2 - The first paragraph, though imaginative in presentation, does not offer itself as a part of any appropriate response. It...
ScholarshipFiorella02 - Feb 27, 2021 / Holt - Feb 28, 2021
|Global Korea Scholarship Personal Statement for Graduate Study in Electrical Engineering.
3 - @Dam2019 Hello, I would definitely just summarize with the first paragraph the most important key factors of the others!...
ScholarshipDam2019 - Feb 21, 2021 / mariana_2314 - Feb 27, 2021
|GLOBAL KOREA SCHOLARSHIP_ PERSONAL STATEMENT_COMPUTER SCIENCE AND ENGINEERING
4 - @Holt @grant_Oliver I am very grateful for your help. I will rewrite based on your comments. Thank you so...
Scholarshipsunny1909 - Feb 25, 2021 / sunny1909 - Feb 27, 2021
|'intellectual growth should commence at birth and cease only at death'. Letter for MAIA scholarship
3 - "Not a bad motivational letter. You have shown a personal, academic, and professional interest in the course that you...
Scholarshipreraxi4908 - Feb 26, 2021 / reraxi4908 - Feb 26, 2021
|Leadership, community service. The Global UGRAD. Why would I be a great participant in this program?
2 - Remove the reference point about how you are familiarizing yourself with American culture. That is not part of the...
Scholarshipbigdreamy - Feb 26, 2021 / Holt - Feb 26, 2021
|DRL model - [KGSP] MASTER IN ARTIFICIAL INTELLIGENCE - Goal of study and detailed study plan
3 - Hi Holt, Thank you for the suggestions! Since master applicants do not need to submit Research Proposal, we...
Scholarshipgrant_Oliver - Feb 17, 2021 / grant_Oliver - Feb 26, 2021
|[KGSP/GKS SCHOLARSHIP] MASTER IN ARTIFICIAL INTELLIGENCE - Future plan after study
2 - That should be the focal point of this future plan after study. They are not interested in knowing...
Scholarshipgrant_Oliver - Feb 23, 2021 / Holt - Feb 26, 2021
|GKS Statement of Purpose - Language Study Plan
2 - - Trying to memorize what in a month? Hangul characters and alphabet? English spelling of Hangul words? There...
ScholarshipAlsgray - Feb 25, 2021 / Holt - Feb 26, 2021
|GKS/KGSP Master in Urban Environmental Planning - Statement of Purpose
2 - There is no need to list you references at any point in this presentation. While these are possibly reading...
ScholarshipTraiaU - Feb 24, 2021 / Holt - Feb 25, 2021
|KGS-G STATEMENT OF PURPOSE - language in Korea
ScholarshipWunuson - Feb 23, 2021 / Wunuson - Feb 24, 2021
|GKS SCHOLARSHIP LANGUAGE STUDY PLAN BEFORE AND AFTER
Scholarshipsruthi1998 - Feb 17, 2021 / TraiaU - Feb 24, 2021
|Motivation, small & medium - sized enterprises - GKS Personal Statement Business Administration
4 - Hello, I suggest you to elaborate the more specific area that you are mastered in to show your academic...
Scholarshipqwepoi - Feb 19, 2021 / fiannyfia - Feb 24, 2021
|Personal Statement for GKS's graduate studies in Communication Design University track
6 - Hi, I like your essay. However it is better for you to mention another area in arts and culture...
Scholarshipmadrisheva - Feb 7, 2021 / fiannyfia - Feb 24, 2021
|Interactive teaching - GKS GRADUATE PERSONAL STATEMENT
NEW - Hello, This is my personal statement and I need some feedback :) Thank you in advance personal...
Scholarshipfiannyfia - Feb 24, 2021 / — -
|American-Hispanic learning process - Personal Statement for the Global Korea Scholarship
Scholarshipalexaguti - Feb 22, 2021 / alexaguti - Feb 24, 2021
|My academic success - The Global UGRAD Program^ why am I a great participant?
Scholarshipiroda_bekmur - Feb 7, 2021 / iroda_bekmur - Feb 24, 2021
|SCHOLARSHIP GKS - PERSONAL STATEMENT GRADUATE DEGREE 2021 - Public Administration.
ScholarshipAnyellaa - Feb 21, 2021 / Anyellaa - Feb 23, 2021
|The efforts you have undertaken so far to obtain information on your study options in Australia?/AAS
2 - ONE QUESTION PER THREAD. ADMIN SHALL DELETE THE OTHER QUESTIONS SHORTLY. Do not confuse the presentation with unnecessary...
Scholarshipcyber168 - Feb 23, 2021 / Holt - Feb 23, 2021
|GLOBAL UGRAD - WHY WOULD I BE A GREAT PARTICIPANT IN THIS STUDENT EXCHANGE PROGRAM
2 - You do not qualify for the program based on this presentation. You have written a lengthy personal statement that...
Scholarshipshaqkandou - Feb 22, 2021 / Holt - Feb 23, 2021
|Laboratories - ChIR Motivational Statement
2 - It would be best for me to list down the points that you actually responded to with this essay...
Scholarshipstrongwarrior - Feb 22, 2021 / Holt - Feb 23, 2021
|Defending the global internet - GOVERNMENT OF IRELAND INTERNATIONAL EDUCATION SCHOLARSHIP
2 - Review the prompt requirement again. You have failed to properly respond to the question because you wrote a personal...
ScholarshipStonye - Feb 22, 2021 / Holt - Feb 23, 2021
|Serving community - Why would you be a great participant in the Global UGRAD Program?
2 - The first 3 paragraphs do not speak of your ability to be a community leader and enforce changes in...
Scholarshipahyar - Feb 22, 2021 / Holt - Feb 23, 2021
|AAS - What are your plans when you finish your studies (Master Program : Tourism)
2 - The last thing that I can do for you here is make the decision for you regarding which statement...
ScholarshipPradausa - Feb 22, 2021 / Holt - Feb 23, 2021
|Fighter family - KGSP Scholarship - Personal Statemente International Relations
3 - Hi gloriacabral, I think you have a good background for application, but you need to shorten your essay. You...
Scholarshipgloriacabral - Feb 22, 2021 / grant_Oliver - Feb 22, 2021
|My commitment to my community - Global Ugrad
2 - The problem with your presentation is that you are representing yourself as a community leader, without having any access...
ScholarshipDankarys - Feb 22, 2021 / Holt - Feb 22, 2021
|Applying the knowledge and experience essay. Sustainable Transportation SISGP
4 - "As someone who experience working ..." Would be better framed as: As my core profession has involved mainly...
Scholarshipndhnif - Feb 16, 2021 / Ishaqur - Feb 20, 2021
|Evaluate the applicant's leadership capacity and potential to play a role in development
3 - @tyanna I think instead of mentioning the currency, try focusing on growth/changes from last term. Furthermore, it would be...
Scholarshiptyanna - Feb 16, 2021 / Ishaqur - Feb 20, 2021
|GOVERNMENT OF IRELAND INTERNATIONAL EDUCATION SCHOLARSHIP
4 - I think you should look into the specific courses available under the program, mention those in the essay to...
Scholarshiptomtomiwa - Feb 16, 2021 / Ishaqur - Feb 20, 2021
|Korean broadcasting will change us for the better - KGSP Master 2021 Personal Statement
3 - Hi Semos, I would like to suggest you to move your motivation paragraph to the top. The motivation is...
Scholarshipsemos - Feb 15, 2021 / grant_Oliver - Feb 17, 2021
|From mathematics to engineering- Personal statement should describe who you are and past experiences
3 - @Holt Thank you very much for your observations, I attach the changes I made, i modified the last sentence...
ScholarshipAeroSAE98 - Feb 16, 2021 / AeroSAE98 - Feb 16, 2021
|My paragraph for applying for a scholarship about experience in Sweden
ScholarshipHena - Feb 6, 2021 / ndhnif - Feb 16, 2021
|Aerospace engineering - Study Objectives essay for FULBRIGHT SCHOLARSHIP
2 - I feel that the binational impact needs to be stronger in terms to referring to America's possible use for...
ScholarshipAeroSAE98 - Feb 15, 2021 / Holt - Feb 16, 2021
|Global issues need global responses - Why did you choose your proposed course and institution*?
2 - Use that quote, and refer to the original speaker, as a stand alone presentation at the start. That will...
ScholarshipSinSonng - Feb 15, 2021 / Holt - Feb 16, 2021
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