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|IELTS WRITING TASK 1: The table below shows the number of vehicles registered in Australia in 2010
2 - The presentation shows percentage of change, not percentage of growth. Your reference is incorrect. It should have been restated...
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|2021 GKS Graduate; Personal Statement; I'm the youngest member of a four...
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|'Motivation Letter' for admission into a Masters in Economics Program in Paris
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|'intellectual growth should commence at birth and cease only at death'. Letter for MAIA scholarship
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|Leadership, community service. The Global UGRAD. Why would I be a great participant in this program?
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|Research Essay: Politics: The Destructor of Relationships
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|Maths and business success - IELTS Writing Task 2 Opinion Essay
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|The high salary should be more concerned than the degree of satisfaction in job. What's your opinion
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|GLOBAL KOREA SCHOLARSHIP_ PERSONAL STATEMENT_COMPUTER SCIENCE AND ENGINEERING
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|Writing task 1 table with a trend - visitor statistics in Australia
2 - All of your paragraphs should have a minimum of 3 sentences. This includes the summary overview. The lack of...
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|[IELTS WRITING TASK 2] Free education irrespective of personal wealth
2 - This is not an extent essay. Therefore, your discussion approach, which is, "to an extent' response is incorrect. There...
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|Children must be a good members of society. What the parents and school can teach it?
2 - This is actually an IELTS Task 2 practice prompt. Were you writing in preparation for that test? Or is...
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|IELTS Writing task 2- The use of social media is replacing face-to-face interaction
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|GKS Statement of Purpose - Language Study Plan
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|Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more popular
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|The graph below shows changes in young adult unemployment rates in England between 1993 and 2012.
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|Interactive teaching - GKS GRADUATE PERSONAL STATEMENT
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|Two given maps demonstrate the road network around a City Hospital in 2007 and in 2010
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|"Teenage Driving Statistics" - Driving Licenses for People Under Eighteen Years Old
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|GKS/KGSP Master in Urban Environmental Planning - Statement of Purpose
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|The natural world - Texas A&M College Station transfer essay prompt A
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|SOP for MS Human Computer-Interaction/ Changing Direction
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|IELTS TASK 2: Investing in science education
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|Global UGRAD 2021. Describe a time when you encountered a conflict and how you handled it
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|IELTS TASK 2: Traveling to work is a negative or positive development. Discuss both views.
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|IELTS Task 2: Will Computer Replace Teachers? I don't think so - they do not have emotions
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|[KGSP/GKS SCHOLARSHIP] MASTER IN ARTIFICIAL INTELLIGENCE - Future plan after study
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|Help for Correction my essay . Academic essay _ IELTS Academic Task 2 on a consumer society
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|KGS-G STATEMENT OF PURPOSE - language in Korea
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|IELTS TASK 1 The line graph illustrates how much waste produced by three companies from 2000 to 2015
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