|IELTS writing task 2: Each year, a number of languages fade into extinction
4 - @LadyOfClockwork As adding one comment in terms of Holt's comment, I can see there is one possibility to correct....
Writing FeedbackLadyOfClockwork - Feb 8, 2021coheny - Feb 13, 2021
|Personal Statement for GKS's graduate studies in Visual Communication Design
4 - The essay is too long. You have a 1 page requirement for this presentation. That means you will need...
Scholarshipfranbrown - Feb 7, 2021Holt - Feb 13, 2021
|Anesthesiologist Assistant Graduate Program; Personal Statement; motivation for career in healthcare
2 - You have clearly explained why you want to pursue a career in healthcare. However, you have not made any...
GraduateLorquetL007 - Feb 12, 2021Holt - Feb 13, 2021
|Application Form: Provide any additional information about your High School science and math
2 - The last sentence is irrelevant. What you should have done was used a few of the word count to...
Undergraduateceleztina - Feb 12, 2021Holt - Feb 13, 2021
|Motivation Letter for Linnaeus scholarship Master program in Sustainable energy.
2 - I am not sure how relevant this writing is to the criteria set by the motivation letter writing guidelines....
Lettersdawit165 - Feb 12, 2021Holt - Feb 13, 2021
|Some believe that computers are the most valuable invention in the late 20th and early 21st century
3 - @Holt I rewrote the essay, is it better? THANK You~ Many people are positive that computers are the...
Writing FeedbackCrazy Snake - Feb 10, 2021Crazy Snake - Feb 13, 2021
|Erasmus mundus scholarship motivation letter (Emotion)
2 - It would be beneficial if you show your academic progression in this field. Indicate a summary of your related...
Lettersmervkd - Feb 10, 2021Holt - Feb 11, 2021
|Struggling for Perseverance Essay
4 - Hey! Perhaps you have already completed the task but here's what I think lol. Maybe you can talk about...
Essayslongforit - Jan 31, 2021starky_thelad - Feb 10, 2021
|[KGSP SCHOLARSHIP] GRADUATE PROGRAM - MASTER IN COMPUTER SCIENCE - Letter of Recommendation
3 - @Holt Thank you so much! I have made the changes suggested. Besides those, do you believe it is a...
LettersSylareeSeeya - Feb 1, 2021SylareeSeeya - Feb 10, 2021
|Becoming a doctor while my trans girlfriend becomes a woman - transfer essay
2 - You covered most of the required elements in this discussion. While it is all compelling and up to date...
Undergraduatehaileybugj - Feb 10, 2021Holt - Feb 10, 2021
|ENVIRONMENTAL PROBLEMS - rising sea levels and excessive use of plastic bags
2 - Oops! You did not only use memorized phrases in your presentation, you totally altered the discussion topic as well....
Writing Feedbacksongthaonguyen - Feb 9, 2021Holt - Feb 10, 2021
|IELTS writting part 1 bar chart practice: Female Unemployment rate in 4 countries of the UK
3 - @Linhmely Your overview: Overall, it could be clearly seen that there are some negligible differences between the statistics...
Writing FeedbackLinhmely - Feb 7, 2021Crazy Snake - Feb 10, 2021
|The Trip - Global UGRAD Program application essay - Why Participate?
2 - This is not really a leadership experience within a community. There is a lack of physical interaction on a...
Scholarshiplemeigeni - Feb 9, 2021Holt - Feb 10, 2021
|People's shopping habits depend more on the age group they belong to than any other factors.
4 - @LadyOfClockwork Your ideas are great, but there is a contradiction in the first body paragraph. The first and...
Writing FeedbackLadyOfClockwork - Feb 6, 2021Crazy Snake - Feb 10, 2021
|Forms of teaching - school should choose students according to their academic abilities
2 - This is a compare and contrast essay with a personal opinion presentation. You have not followed the required discussion...
Writing Feedbackstormiiii - Feb 9, 2021Holt - Feb 10, 2021
|Why would you be a great participant in the Global UGRAD program? Powerful vision and effort.
2 - The scholarship program always bases its first consideration of the applicant based on his community leadership skills and abilities....
ScholarshipAlvaro - Feb 9, 2021Holt - Feb 10, 2021
|The proportion of people who used the Internet in three countries between 1999 and 2009
3 - i think you should go for this structure with the introduction, the overview and the 2 detailed paragraphs...
Writing Feedbackkhadong - Feb 6, 2021Linhmely - Feb 9, 2021
|The programming process - Q1 Waterloo AIF - "Why I applied to Waterloo Software Eng and Comp Sci"
2 - Since this is a character limited essay, you should not use irrelevant opening sentences such as the one you...
UndergraduatewannaB - Feb 9, 2021Holt - Feb 9, 2021
|IELTS ESSAY TASK 2: Young people in the modern world seem to have more power
2 - The original presentation uses the word "seem", which means that the claim is questionable. Therefore, you should not be...
Writing Feedbackheyatafroz - Feb 8, 2021Holt - Feb 9, 2021
|The graph shows the number of visitors to a variety of art galleries in 2011.
3 - Seams that the sctructure of the essay is correct, however it is difficult to estimate it without image. Instead...
Writing Feedbackhanngoctran1104 - Jan 25, 2021madrisheva - Feb 8, 2021
|Obesity is now a major global epidemic. What can be done to tackle this increasingly common problem?
3 - Although you have included relevant examples from experience that are apt on a more individual level, you should look...
Writing Feedbackomonaija - Feb 2, 2021lennonmenace - Feb 8, 2021
|Psychology Argumentative essay about anxiety disorder
2 - You should start by doing your homework. Find out the meaning of anxiety disorder. While you read the reference...
Essaysm_vanhorn - Feb 8, 2021Holt - Feb 8, 2021
|Master's Programme in Mechanical Engineering with Automotive Engineering specialization
2 - The motivation for choosing the university is too superficial. It is based on commonly known information and what you...
GraduateSam96 - Feb 7, 2021Holt - Feb 8, 2021
|The proportion of people who had a habit of eating five portions of fruit and vegetables every day
3 - Hello, I am not sure that women consume more vegetables and fruit than men. What I learn from the...
Writing FeedbackThao Vy Tran Thi - Jan 30, 2021LadyOfClockwork - Feb 8, 2021
|WHY DID YOU CHOOSE YOUR PROPOSED COURSE AND INSTITUTION? (Master of International Trade)
4 - @brsn I believe that in OASIS you have to choose two universities instead of just one. Many awardees suggest...
Scholarshipbrsn - Jan 22, 2021d2ny - Feb 7, 2021
|Motivation letter - Master's degree in Neuroscience
3 - @Holt Hello, thank you so much for your insightful remarks, I will work hard on editing the second paragraph...
Lettersmeri_amii - Feb 6, 2021meri_amii - Feb 7, 2021
|Ielts Writing Task 2 about the designation of newly constructed building
2 - The first sentence in your presentation does not make sense. It is trying to be impressive in presentation by...
Writing FeedbackTongkhangte - Feb 7, 2021Holt - Feb 7, 2021
|To serve my country - UGRAD exchange program why am I a great participant for this program
2 - The first part of the presentation makes you sound like a beauty pageant contestant. You may want to rethink...
Scholarshipmariami_77 - Feb 6, 2021Holt - Feb 7, 2021
|IELTS WRITING TEST II, SEVERAL LANGUAGES DIE OUT
Writing FeedbackCrazy Snake - Feb 1, 2021Crazy Snake - Feb 6, 2021
|Innovation and technology projects - GKS Program - Study Plan
2 - There are several paragraphs that need to be removed from this presentation. The first 2 paragraphs do not help...
GraduateThyciane - Feb 5, 2021Holt - Feb 6, 2021