|SOP- SCAD - What first drawn me to a career as a visual artist were animations I watched as a child
2 - There is no real purpose for your studies. You have written a motivational letter rather than a statement of...
GraduateDizm - Feb 15, 2021Holt - Feb 16, 2021
|Aerospace engineering - Study Objectives essay for FULBRIGHT SCHOLARSHIP
2 - I feel that the binational impact needs to be stronger in terms to referring to America's possible use for...
ScholarshipAeroSAE98 - Feb 15, 2021Holt - Feb 16, 2021
|Global issues need global responses - Why did you choose your proposed course and institution*?
2 - Use that quote, and refer to the original speaker, as a stand alone presentation at the start. That will...
ScholarshipSinSonng - Feb 15, 2021Holt - Feb 16, 2021
|Essay about how you can apply the knowledge once finish the education in the own country
2 - The discussion is totally off base. Remember that the prompt assumes you have already completed the course and you...
ScholarshipBarol16 - Feb 15, 2021Holt - Feb 16, 2021
|IELTS Writing Task 2 - Family size essay
2 - Unfortunately, scoring is part of our premium services so I cannot score your essay. Any student who scores your...
Writing Feedbackboboiboy1a3 - Feb 15, 2021Holt - Feb 16, 2021
|Should sharing knowledge about scientific research, business and the academic world be allowed?
2 - You have turned a 5 paragraph comparison essay into a 4 paragraph personal opinion essay. The format for your...
Writing Feedbackgiangkc1811 - Feb 15, 2021Holt - Feb 16, 2021
|Me helping people - Describe yourself in 285 words.
2 - The prompt is not about what interests you. It is about who you are. What are your personal traits...
Scholarshipteddyz - Feb 15, 2021Holt - Feb 16, 2021
|Statement of Purpose; Goal of Study & Study Plan Graduate : Art Management
6 - Hi moondeluna, The SOP requirement in this section is goal of study and detailed study plan. I feel...
Scholarshipmoondeluna - Feb 13, 2021grant_Oliver - Feb 16, 2021
|IELTS ESSAY TASK 2, it is about how human action can damage the environment.
Writing Feedbackmalugesteira - Feb 12, 2021malugesteira - Feb 15, 2021
|[Writing task 1] - Household income and spending on food and clothes in UK
5 - As far as I am concerned , in the last sentence of the 3rd paragraph, "while" is used with","...
Writing Feedbackvungocf1417 - Feb 8, 2021lan82 - Feb 15, 2021
|[KGSP SCHOLARSHIP] GRADUATE PROGRAM - MASTER IN ARTIFICIAL INTELLIGENCE - Personal Statement
Scholarshipgrant_Oliver - Feb 14, 2021grant_Oliver - Feb 15, 2021
|Scholarship motivation letter for masters studies - how you can apply the knowledge and etc..
3 - @Holt Dear Holt. Thank you very much for your timely response. I will connect the work of the UNDP...
Scholarshipkomadx - Feb 14, 2021komadx - Feb 15, 2021
|Students Working Part-time - IELTS Writing Task 2
5 - I do recommend you to use transition words (therefore, furthermore, additionally) at the beginning of your paragraphs to be...
Writing FeedbackTpG2006 - Feb 10, 2021teddyz - Feb 15, 2021
|GKS-G Scholarship Personal Statement: Marketing Major
2 - If the first paragraph is your motivational statement, then you need to work on it. The motivational statement should...
Scholarshipoahr93 - Feb 14, 2021Holt - Feb 15, 2021
|Motivation letter for a fast track MSc program in computer science for excellent undergrad students
2 - You still offer a note as to why you chose to take advantage of this program as an undergraduate...
Letterslpotel01 - Feb 15, 2021Holt - Feb 15, 2021
|Jonas Salk, the Man Who Saved the World with Vaccines
2 - Well, this is an interesting personal influence essay. Unfortunately, without knowing if this is in response to a prompt,...
Writing FeedbackWiseCupcake - Feb 14, 2021Holt - Feb 15, 2021
|The Engineer I want to be. Committing to the global community Scholarship Essay
2 - Here is the thing, your essay shows you not as a community leader, but as a community follower in...
Scholarshipeds420 - Feb 14, 2021Holt - Feb 15, 2021
|Business Development - YOUR PROPOSED COURSE AND INSTITUTION? (FOR AUSTRALIA AWARDS SCHOLARSHIP)
2 - You only responded to the course choice discussion. You did not indicate the university of choice and why you...
ScholarshipRatudestiani - Feb 14, 2021Holt - Feb 15, 2021
|Women Empowering: The Global UGRAD Program
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|IELTS task 1, what nursing graduates did in the UK
Writing Feedbacklan82 - Feb 4, 2021lan82 - Feb 15, 2021
|Personal statement for KGSP scholarship Master program in English Linguistics
5 - Just so you know the requirements for the personal statement have changed as follows! - Motivations with which...
Scholarshipaigerim87 - Feb 7, 2021oahr93 - Feb 14, 2021
|Interest in Engineering question for Waterloo
Undergraduateipuga - Feb 13, 2021ipuga - Feb 14, 2021
|[KGSP SCHOLARSHIP] GRADUATE PROGRAM - MASTER IN PUBLIC ADMINISTRATION - Personal Statement
5 - Hi Aline, Please notice that the KGSP SOP and PS requirements had changed. According to the newly release guideline,...
Scholarshipaccandido - Jan 31, 2021grant_Oliver - Feb 14, 2021
|IELTS- Task 2: Health benefits in countryside and cities
NEW - Please give me some advice on my writing essay. Thanks a lot! Topic: Many people believe that it...
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|You recently saw a photograph of an important school occasion - writing an informal letter
2 - The one thing you will not get from this forum, is someone who will write this letter for you....
Essaysking2k17 - Feb 14, 2021Holt - Feb 14, 2021
|"Success is not final; failure is not fatal" - being a great participant in the Global UGRAD program
2 - Without the reference to how you have actually served your community, which is what the prompt asked you write...
Scholarshipelisabettgt - Feb 14, 2021Holt - Feb 14, 2021
|IELTS Writing task - study the science of food - requirement of advice
4 - hi, the format of your essay is wrong as it contains only 4 paragraphs. Your opinion is not strong...
Writing Feedbackcoheny - Feb 10, 2021Priscillia - Feb 14, 2021
|Question 1 scholarship; Why Curtin? Because it is a university that specializes in mining
2 - Your employment background should be mentioned in some capacity as the basis of the reference point for your course...
ScholarshipFaridFR - Feb 13, 2021Holt - Feb 14, 2021
|GKS Graduate 2021 - Masters in International Business (Personal Statement)
3 - Hi Olivia! The feedback that I have for you is that it looks too short or simplified. I would...
Scholarshippetitemuncher - Feb 4, 2021oahr93 - Feb 14, 2021
|IELTS WRITING TASK 2: TOPIC EDUCATION & - TYPE: DISCUSS BOTH THESE VIEWS AND GIVE YOUR OWN OPINION.
4 - @ilikesnow Hi! I think you should paraphrase the question completely instead of paraphrasing only one of the statements. You...
Writing Feedbackilikesnow - Feb 11, 2021ranagiani - Feb 13, 2021