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3 - There are some position and spelling mistakes in your essay. Using 'occurred' instead of 'occured'. The 'obviously' stands in...
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|Global Korea Scholarship Personal Statement for Graduate Study in Electrical Engineering.
2 - The motivation aspect is only one of the considerable factors for your application. Unless I can read the complete...
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2 - The problem is your lack of familiarity with the English language. Specifically, how to write a movie review. You...
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|IETLS Writing Task 2 | Effects of negative reporting on individuals and society
3 - I think the explanations and opinions are not enough clearly. And also I think by reporting problems, governments can...
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|Many claim that the important factor in sport is physical strength; however, the opponents disagree
2 - The essay instructions requires a 4 paragraph comparison discussion with your personal opinion presented. Your approach to the writing...
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|Writing 1: The line shows the percentage of tourists to Scotland who visited Edinburgh attractions
2 - You have several spelling errors in the presentation that show a lack of proof reading for this paper. You...
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|Applying the knowledge and experience essay. Sustainable Transportation SISGP
4 - "As someone who experience working ..." Would be better framed as: As my core profession has involved mainly...
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|Evaluate the applicant's leadership capacity and potential to play a role in development
3 - @tyanna I think instead of mentioning the currency, try focusing on growth/changes from last term. Furthermore, it would be...
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|GOVERNMENT OF IRELAND INTERNATIONAL EDUCATION SCHOLARSHIP
4 - I think you should look into the specific courses available under the program, mention those in the essay to...
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|In some countries, it is important to have a private house rather than renting one
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|Ielts1 - The quantity of pineapple exports in three different countries and the cost of pineapple
2 - Avoid using long sentences in your presentations that require 2 different sets of information. In the first paragraph, you...
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|IELTS Writing Task 1: Student enrolment in 1980 and 2000
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|Essay about the effect of technology using from home
3 - In the conclusion, the phrase "All in all" is quite informal, so I suggest you use "In conclusion" or...
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|Application for the math program of the university of Waterloo - AIF form essay
6 - maybe be more specific about why you are interested in the math program and uwaterloo would be better, and...
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NEW - feel free to give any advices! Question 1: REASONS FOR CHOOSING YOUR PROGRAM AND WATERLOO (*REQUIRED) Please tell...
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|Students choosing subjects - writing introduction for some essay
2 - One topic per thread There are direct questions being asked in the topic. What is the reason? What...
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|IELTS: world pineapple exports and a breakdown of the cost to the consumer of each pineapple in 2019
2 - Incorrect vocabulary was used in the summary overview. The word "Otherwise" cannot be used in this presentation because you...
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|The major environmental problem is the loss of specific species of plants and animals
NEW - Some people say that the main environmental problem off our time is the loss of particular species of plants...
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|Reasons to choose Waterloo and mechanical engineering- Help with AIF
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|The foundation for sportsmen's success. PHYSICAL STRENGTH AND MENTAL STRENGTH IN SPORT
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|[Motivation letter] RWTH Aachen Summer School Scholarship-Supply Chain Program
3 - @Holt Thank you in advance for your feedback. I would like to attach the writing instructions below. It...
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|IELTS WRITING TASK 2: the science and preparation of food should be taught in school time
4 - @nvsthao Hi! I think your body paragraph 1 is quite undeveloped as paragraph 2. Because it is a discussion...
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|Korean broadcasting will change us for the better - KGSP Master 2021 Personal Statement
3 - Hi Semos, I would like to suggest you to move your motivation paragraph to the top. The motivation is...
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|Math, coop system - AIF-Reasons for Choosing The Programs
2 - You have to allot 300 characters per program. Revise the essay to clearly present your educational goal and Waterloo...
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|BIOMEDICAL SCIENCES - University of Waterloo AIF
5 - UPDATED VERSION: Along with my passion for science, being a problem solver and logical thinker by nature, I...
Undergraduatehat2003 - Feb 14, 2021hat2003 - Feb 17, 2021
|From mathematics to engineering- Personal statement should describe who you are and past experiences
3 - @Holt Thank you very much for your observations, I attach the changes I made, i modified the last sentence...
ScholarshipAeroSAE98 - Feb 16, 2021AeroSAE98 - Feb 16, 2021
|IELTS: Do you believe that professional athletes make good role model for young people?
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|The table gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries
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|My paragraph for applying for a scholarship about experience in Sweden
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