|'As America closes its eyes' - Grey Decay by The Sacrosanct College Essay
2 - Greetings! You make some good points here. The subject matter is one which can engender some strong emotions....
Book ReportsThe_Sacrosanct - Oct 23, 2006EF_Team2 - Oct 25, 2006
|Cause and effect paper - getting over abuse
2 - Greetings! You have written a good essay with a strong, personal perspective. I do have some minor corrections...
Writing Feedbackjkolhagen - Oct 23, 2006EF_Team2 - Oct 23, 2006
|"military analogies" - UC Admissions Essay
4 - Greetings! I might suggest that the first two sentences are a little repetitive -- you use "describe" twice....
UndergraduateArmand - Oct 23, 2006EF_Team2 - Oct 23, 2006
|Looking for help - graduate school admission personal statement MSW program
2 - Greetings! Admissions essays can be a bit tricky because most people feel uncomfortable writing about themselves, especially when...
Essayslois - Oct 20, 2006EF_Team2 - Oct 21, 2006
|On the morning I've been waiting for all year!
2 - Greetings! Technically a "run-on sentence" is actually two complete sentences with no punctuation dividing them. I don't see...
Writing Feedbackfiguresk8tingchik - Oct 15, 2006EF_Team2 - Oct 19, 2006
|Something Deeper - What am I looking for? Why am I here? Meaning of Life?
2 - Greetings! This is an interesting topic! I'll point out a few things I noticed that you might consider...
Writing Feedbackstarphyre - Oct 17, 2006EF_Team2 - Oct 18, 2006
|FSU Admission Essay (confidence and leadership)
4 - Greetings! Yes, it is better -- it is very good! (You may have overlooked "aggression" in the last...
UndergraduateConfusedmiamiboy - Oct 17, 2006EF_Team2 - Oct 17, 2006
|Do you like to smell the strong cigarette smoke at public places? NO!
Writing Feedbackjanice - Jul 21, 2006figuresk8tingchik - Oct 15, 2006
|Story telling topic; essay based on an interview with a member of your family
12 - Greetings! Your story is definitely progressing and getting better every time you work on it! First, I'll answer...
Undergraduateeconsangel - Oct 11, 2006EF_Team2 - Oct 15, 2006
|WW1 , the Treaty of Versalilles, WW11
2 - Greetings! You have an excellent start here! I agree that your paragraphs could use just a bit of...
Essaysjoshua_arebalo - Oct 14, 2006EF_Team2 - Oct 14, 2006
|Help, I'm new here. Is it okay to use parenthese around...
2 - Greetings! Sometimes it's a judgment call as to whether quotation marks are required or not, but I think...
EssaysChloeSong - Oct 12, 2006EF_Team2 - Oct 13, 2006
|How to Deal with a Difficult Dissertation Advisor?
NEW - How many of us have shown up to an advisor meeting with a stack of carefully acquired research and...
DissertationsEF_Team - Oct 12, 2006 -
|'Woods Riding and The Dirt Bike' - Process essay review
2 - Greetings! You have done a wonderful job of describing the process of riding a dirt bike. I almost...
Writing FeedbackBadAngel299 - Oct 11, 2006EF_Team2 - Oct 12, 2006
|The Difference Between Personal and Professional Relationship
EssaysPraveen - Oct 9, 2006EF_Team2 - Oct 10, 2006
|The damnation of the canyon is one man's account
2 - Greetings! You've done a good job of expressing your disagreement with the author's views. I'm guessing "The damnation...
Writing Feedbackarkaudio123 - Oct 4, 2006EF_Team2 - Oct 5, 2006
|Future of Media Conclusion - (High School)
Writing Feedbacknjbignell - Oct 4, 2006njbignell - Oct 4, 2006
|Paper on an econ. concept that help u understand an issue in ur life
10 - Greetings! You are certainly working hard to improve your writing; that's great! I have to say, I have...
Undergraduateeconsangel - Sep 26, 2006EF_Team2 - Oct 3, 2006
|Doctor Faustus Essay
Writing Feedbackjeffspears - Oct 2, 2006EF_Team2 - Oct 2, 2006
|Who is a villain? Need help with essay on Villain of Canadian history
3 - Greetings! When you are looking for someone who is the "most" anything, it is often subjective -- that...
EssaysVlad - Sep 25, 2006EF_Team2 - Sep 25, 2006
|'Attack of the Bees' - essay bout a day I will never forget
3 - Greetings! Your essay does, indeed, have details and coherence! Just a few little things pop out to me....
Writing FeedbackBadAngel299 - Sep 24, 2006EF_Team2 - Sep 25, 2006
|Paper On Theologians.
5 - Greetings! While I can't give you a lot of information specifically on theologians since I'm not an expert...
EssaysVlad - Sep 16, 2006EF_Team2 - Sep 22, 2006
|MOVIE THEME EDITING
5 - Greetings! I think "cause" is the proper word there. The part I have trouble with is "do everything...
Essaysstartanewlife - Sep 17, 2006EF_Team2 - Sep 19, 2006
|Nazi Germany was a totalitarian state
2 - Greetings! It is always important to keep in mind that the function of writing is to communicate. If...
Writing Feedbackougoah - Sep 16, 2006EF_Team2 - Sep 16, 2006
|Some information about Ibesn
4 - Greetings again! Perhaps I should have said The Ibsen Society of America. The information on their site seems...
EssaysEileen - Sep 15, 2006EF_Team2 - Sep 16, 2006
|My review on Henrick Ibsen's A Doll's House
Book Reportssmskamel - Sep 12, 2006smskamel - Sep 13, 2006
|MAJOR CONCERNS on T.S. Eliot's context revealed in The Love Song of J Alfred
Writing Feedbackougoah - Sep 12, 2006ougoah - Sep 13, 2006
|Christianity in Beowulf ; Is Beowulf is a Christian poem or not?
2 - Greetings! You have written an excellent essay! While it is impressive and very nearly perfect, I have just...
Writing Feedbackjeffspears - Sep 11, 2006EF_Team2 - Sep 11, 2006
|Metaphor; we are constantly hearing and using it in our daily lives
NEW - Although we do not always see it so obviously, we are constantly hearing and using metaphors in our daily...
Grammar, UsageEF_Team - Sep 10, 2006 -
|An Introduction to Figurative Language
NEW - In order to be successful in English or literary studies at any level, and for that matter, to be...
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|What can people do to live a long life?
4 - Greetings! While I can understand why you might want to edit your post or to have "private messaging"...
Writing Feedbackstartanewlife - Aug 14, 2006EF_Team2 - Sep 2, 2006