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Help for Correction my essay . Academic essay _ IELTS Academic Task 2 on a consumer society

2 - Good restatement with the slight problem of you still using the phrase "which possessing" in the presentation. The best...

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The affordable care act and what the solution is

2 - This is a very timely essay. However, it tends to get confusing to read because of the constantly diverting...

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IELTS TASK 2:Discuss pros and cons for the young between gap year and starting university studies.

3 - @Holt thank you so much...

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[KGSP/GKS SCHOLARSHIP] MASTER IN ARTIFICIAL INTELLIGENCE - Future plan after study

NEW - Greeting from Taiwan! Good evening : ) I am intending to apply the admission for KAIST graduate school...

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IELTS1: The given line graph displays the number of alumni in Canada within fiveteen years 1992-2007

3 - @Holt Hi, thank you for taking your time to evaluate my writing, but I don't fully understand what you...

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The efforts you have undertaken so far to obtain information on your study options in Australia?/AAS

2 - ONE QUESTION PER THREAD. ADMIN SHALL DELETE THE OTHER QUESTIONS SHORTLY. Do not confuse the presentation with unnecessary...

Scholarshipcyber168 - Feb 23, 2021Holt - 2 days ago

PRACTICE WRITING D1 - (Paragraph) Volunteer work

2 - In order to properly write the response paragraph, you first have to understand what response method you have to...

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GLOBAL UGRAD - WHY WOULD I BE A GREAT PARTICIPANT IN THIS STUDENT EXCHANGE PROGRAM

2 - You do not qualify for the program based on this presentation. You have written a lengthy personal statement that...

Scholarshipshaqkandou - Feb 22, 2021Holt - Feb 23, 2021

Laboratories - ChIR Motivational Statement

2 - It would be best for me to list down the points that you actually responded to with this essay...

Scholarshipstrongwarrior - Feb 22, 2021Holt - Feb 23, 2021

Instead of finding measures to solve climate change problem we should find some ways to live with it

2 - Why do you totally disagree? What are the reasoning topics you will be discussing? Present the outline of topics...

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Defending the global internet - GOVERNMENT OF IRELAND INTERNATIONAL EDUCATION SCHOLARSHIP

2 - Review the prompt requirement again. You have failed to properly respond to the question because you wrote a personal...

ScholarshipStonye - Feb 22, 2021Holt - Feb 23, 2021

Serving community - Why would you be a great participant in the Global UGRAD Program?

2 - The first 3 paragraphs do not speak of your ability to be a community leader and enforce changes in...

Scholarshipahyar - Feb 22, 2021Holt - Feb 23, 2021

AAS - What are your plans when you finish your studies (Master Program : Tourism)

2 - The last thing that I can do for you here is make the decision for you regarding which statement...

ScholarshipPradausa - Feb 22, 2021Holt - Feb 23, 2021

Digital pandemic - Writing an outstanding Essay for AAS

5 - I think you should elaborate more on your professional and academic interest....

ScholarshipLovelyshaa - Feb 20, 2021Dankarys - Feb 22, 2021

Canadian entrepreneurs - Waterloo AIF, first question of Part A

3 - When you're talking about future goals, you need to provide a more solid educational and working experience background to...

UndergraduateOlaMercedes - Feb 19, 2021Pradausa - Feb 22, 2021

Fighter family - KGSP Scholarship - Personal Statemente International Relations

3 - Hi gloriacabral, I think you have a good background for application, but you need to shorten your essay. You...

Scholarshipgloriacabral - Feb 22, 2021grant_Oliver - Feb 22, 2021

MBA and technology - [KGSP-G] MASTERS IN BUSINESS ADMINISTRATION-STATEMENT OF PURPOSE

3 - @Holt Thank you so much. I will revise this now...

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My commitment to my community - Global Ugrad

2 - The problem with your presentation is that you are representing yourself as a community leader, without having any access...

ScholarshipDankarys - Feb 22, 2021Holt - Feb 22, 2021

Oil consumption of four different major consumers - Ielts task 1 - line graph

2 - The task allows only 20 minutes for total writing, that includes editing and proof reading. So the standard writing...

Writing FeedbackHainguyen88 - Feb 21, 2021Holt - Feb 22, 2021

Is it true that the vegetarian diet is more beneficial for health than eating meat?

2 - The subject proposed for this prompt is not being presented in an argumentative form. It is presented as an...

Writing Feedbackella_lyly - Feb 21, 2021Holt - Feb 22, 2021

AAS - Accountant/Auditor - plans when you finish your studies?[500 characters]

3 - Hi Holt, Thank you for your feedback....

ScholarshipRebu - Feb 18, 2021Rebu - Feb 22, 2021

Personal Statement for International Masters in Security & Strategy Studies, Erasmus Mundus Program

3 - @Holt Hi Holt as a bit of a clarification this is for the self funded spots and not the...

GraduateIshaqur - Feb 20, 2021Ishaqur - Feb 21, 2021

MULTIPLE ASPECTS OF SPACE EXPLORATION AND THE PREDICTION OF ITS CHANGE IN THE FUTURE

3 - There are some position and spelling mistakes in your essay. Using 'occurred' instead of 'occured'. The 'obviously' stands in...

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Global Korea Scholarship Personal Statement for Graduate Study in Electrical Engineering.

2 - The motivation aspect is only one of the considerable factors for your application. Unless I can read the complete...

ScholarshipDam2019 - Feb 21, 2021Holt - Feb 21, 2021

Tell about the most interesting film you have seen recently

2 - The problem is your lack of familiarity with the English language. Specifically, how to write a movie review. You...

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Cheaper international travel and more countries welcome foreign visitors. Adv outweigh disadv?

3 - Thank you a lot Holt...

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IETLS Writing Task 2 | Effects of negative reporting on individuals and society

3 - I think the explanations and opinions are not enough clearly. And also I think by reporting problems, governments can...

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Many claim that the important factor in sport is physical strength; however, the opponents disagree

2 - The essay instructions requires a 4 paragraph comparison discussion with your personal opinion presented. Your approach to the writing...

Writing FeedbackAurora27 - Feb 19, 2021Holt - Feb 20, 2021

Writing 1: The line shows the percentage of tourists to Scotland who visited Edinburgh attractions

2 - You have several spelling errors in the presentation that show a lack of proof reading for this paper. You...

Writing FeedbackVanVan Nguyen - Feb 19, 2021Holt - Feb 20, 2021

Applying the knowledge and experience essay. Sustainable Transportation SISGP

4 - "As someone who experience working ..." Would be better framed as: As my core profession has involved mainly...

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